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March 24th, 2011, 1:22 pm

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over head shot of doom
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Reply Journey, March 24th, 2011, 1:33 pm

We’re still in that darn cave though I think will just be a few more pages and then we can move on to so different scenery at least. I tried to keep it a little interesting but changing up the POV. That bottom panel is my first time a temping to do an overhead shot. I’ve noticed that tends to make the cave they’re in look really freaking tall when it really isn’t. Also don’t ask me what kind of dinosaur that is in the left-hand corner. I really have no clue. I was just something I make up cause that area looked really blank.

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Reply Misty (Guest), March 24th, 2011, 2:47 pm

i really like the last panel! looks good! keep up the good work!

Reply Joe 2.0 (Guest), March 26th, 2011, 2:02 am

I'm likin' the comic so far, but I've got one thing to improve on: the humans uniforms. They are rather counter-intuitive to combat (no camouflage, quite the opposite actually, and no pouches for ammunition or essential supplies). Hope that helps!

Reply Journey, March 26th, 2011, 8:55 am

yea I've been kind of wondering about that. origanly I did their uniforms like that so it would be easy to tell they where from the same unit as the dead guy the kids found in the mech. (he wouldn't need camouflage I'm thinking) you're right though any self-respecting mamen would have found them easyly. (the kids might still have gotting caught though they wheren't expecting an ambush)However I don't think I can fix them for the next post I'm worried the sudden costum change might be jaring for some readers but I should see if I can fix this before I publish it in book form.

Reply Joe 2.0 (Guest), March 26th, 2011, 10:25 am

Yeah, I see what you're saying. However, on the same note, the Walker pilot would also most likely have worn OD green to provide at least minimal camouflage, in case his vehicle were crippled (as well as have carried a small assault weapon). But, I shall cease my nitpickery, and let you back to your work!

Reply Journey, March 26th, 2011, 10:58 am

thanks for the feedback.

Reply Joe 2.0 (Guest), April 6th, 2011, 12:57 am

Hey, Journey! When are you going to put up more of these? I seem to find myself enthralled with them...

Reply Journey, April 7th, 2011, 7:48 am

as soon as I get the new page done. Unforcahnly I'm a slow artist and I've kind of been swamed with commitions lately. I'm hoping to have a preview up on facebook soon though

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