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May 3rd, 2011, 9:12 am

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Max, Shut up! You’re making it worse.
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Reply Journey, May 3rd, 2011, 9:12 am

Ok yea, I agree that it was a good idea not to let Joanna do the talking, but I’m starting to think having Max do it wasn’t such a great idea either. The boy is such a blabbermouth.

I wanted to do something to tie back to a personality trait I gave Max. Max might be smart when it comes to machines but that doesn’t exactly make him wise. He knew enough not to talk about Dawn it self, but when he gets on a roll…if the guy hadn’t reacted like he did he probably found out butt loads of stuff (if Jo didn’t find a way to shut him up first).

One last note, in my last comic some one pointed out the uniforms the soldier is wearing wouldn’t work in a forest area. I agree but for the webcomic I’m keeping them the same cause I was worried the sudden costume change would be jarring for some readers. I will, however, change them after we get past this chapter and for the printed version.

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Reply Bernard, May 3rd, 2011, 12:23 pm

I don't exactly see why the uniforms wouldn't work, other than the fact that blue and red don't exactly blend with green very well. depending on what kind of technology you've thought up for them, they could have some sort of stationary cloaking mechanism. not exactly like an invisibilty unit, but something that temporarily changes the colors of the uniform depending on the surrounding environment, just to kind of throw out an idea for you.

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